Tuesday, July 19, 2005

Where's Your Tambourine Now, Sleeping Bear? Comments

Rating: 4.5

some will be swallowed
by their mothers.
some will outlive their daughters.
far across the waves,
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Max Reif 19 July 2005

I don't 'get' all of it, but each line sounds profound to me. And I get a feeling this piece is written with quite a bit of awareness. The lines seem artful, and I'm not sure why, but I also like the repetition of the last line.

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Lisa Zaran

Lisa Zaran

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