Saturday, June 13, 2009

Where The Sun Sets Comments

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In the lap of the horizon,
over the blinks of the evening lulls,
red yellow and crimson clouds,
the painted sky by greater sun,
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Rafique Farooqi
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always it is out of of reach, always i want to go there, where there the sun sets..........It is not out of reach. we get the chance once in a life time at appoit ed our where it is time to set in... it is just reminder to us that i daily set in but u too will set in once in life tie forever...nice one....10 read mime a little home

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Marieta Maglas 01 July 2009

nice visual metaphor: ''the painted sky by greater sun, '' poetic eye..well written

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Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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