Whisper Poem by Deadly Psycho

Whisper

Rating: 4.5


A childish voice,
A childish choice,
A whisper so very soft,
A whisper of someone you loved,
Whispers of sadness, whispers of love,
Whispers of the Gods, which watch from above,
A whisper sure is a peculiar thing,
A whisper is a line of words, as fragile as a little string,
When used to express your darkest inner voice,
People will shiver, for they haven't got a choice,
Though upon being used for non other than good,
Goodness, will be the shivers root,
A whisper sure is a bendable thing,
So use it carefully, for what you can't say, nor even sing,
Because a whisper is like a childish voice,
Using whispers to express yourself, sure is a peculiar choice.

Tuesday, November 15, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: choice,voice,words
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I'm a 14 year old student which speaks Dutch, I like to express myself this way because its private, yet opening yourself up so much, thats why I'd like a comment too, even if it'd be a critical comment, I can learn from those aswell, than atleast I know what I've done wrong, Thanks alot guys!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sister Frances 17 November 2016

A whisper sure is a peculiar thing.. it is indeed. I have never thought of it as a bendable thing.You can't replicate the feeling of someone whispering in your ear because it feels so different and you are so right it does make your hair stand on end. Keep sharing :) Psycho's are known for their intelligence!

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