White-Out Poem by Nancy Ames

White-Out



(This poem is a dramatic monologue spoken by an implied character)


'The snow is falling faster
and I could never say
I'd save her from disaster.
I had to go away.

I'd never seen her face
when she came on to me.
She seemed so commonplace.
I take it when it's free.

Her child with my blue eyes
is looking through a fence
at jungle and bright skies
and scenes of violence.

I can't see six feet further
than the windshield of my truck.
I didn't mean to hurt her.
She just ran out of luck.

Thank God I'm almost home! '
Then everything went black.
In twisted steel and chrome,
he rode the railroad track.

Friday, December 28, 2007
Topic(s) of this poem: snow
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary Gordley 28 December 2007

Very well written. The drama builds to an ultimate conclussion.

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Nancy Ames

Nancy Ames

Hamilton, Ontario, Canada
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