Who Am I? Comments

Hi Guys, First off, I want to thank you all for your comments. Secondly, I know that this poem is really long. I just thought you might like to know that the reason it is is because it is the original of a poem I did for school. It had to be this long. I will revise it and make it better though. Thanks. Ta-ta, Sarah

Sarah, it is an impressive poem. one of the best i've ever read. focus more about the describtion of yourself, in a way, it won't sound exagerating, or over simplified. describe freely and with a touch of reality. always use our comments to make a better poet of yourself, and a better hope for the world.

Very pantheist and original

I love the idea of the poem but thought it was long and drawn out.

Very Beautiful. Its like you are at one with the universe. Theodora Onken