Friday, June 17, 2011

Why? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why? ...
Why did you go again, and again, and again? ? why?
Why did you leave me in this world? ! ? ! !
I thought you loved me, but i qusse i was wrong..
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Tammy Aponte
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 17 June 2011

This is really a nice work. I like it for its vivid imagery and skilful description. A fine 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A busy street on page 1.

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