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Empty dark eyes
Staring into space
Feeling devoid of purpose,
Have you embraced the grave?
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Frances Ayers
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Frances Ayers 17 June 2012

Thanks Adeline.The poem was written after the suicide of my 4o year old brother.In it, I am questioning him as to why he took his life.

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Adeline Foster 17 June 2012

Enigmatic this, can it be that we are to blame for that last thread of life ebbing away? Yet this is such a well written poem that, somehow, I may have missed the intent.

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Frances Ayers

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