Will Somebody Pleas Take Me? Comments

i think it's funny when people call things that don't have any rhyme Poetry....with that said, I felt the intent of the writing and it made me want to say...i'll take you...come here and you will never feel that way again...I live in a country where I think a lot of kids feel that way and I do what i can but one man in a country of more than 7000 islands is truly a drop in the bucket and it's sad to know so many have heavy hearts....when they are children it's something that is very hard to think about.

words echoing in heart....a beautiful poem.