Will You Poem by britt thompson

Will You



when it is raining will you be my umbrella? .when it is sunny will you be my shade? .when i am lost will you be my map? .when i am surrounded by pavement will you be the grass i lay down on? .when i am suffocateing will you be the air i need to breathe? .will you be the medicine that eases my heartache? .will you be the soothen breeze? that keeps me cool on a hot summer day.And finally, will you be the one? i spend all eternity with.

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Adeline Foster 15 October 2012

A very good beginning to poetry. But you must write itin poetic form. Start by making each sentence start on a new line. Then use caps. Read mine - Sonnet Beyond Love - Adeline

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