Tuesday, October 6, 2009

Will You Be There Comments

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Tomorrow I will be leaving
for I have to travel far
I have asked you to come with me
and I wonder will you be there.
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David Harris
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Carol Gall 06 October 2009

has a want and need in your words 10

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Tsira Goge 06 October 2009

Beautiful poem, but, If you are not assured, that is badly, but all the same, expectation is sweet, David..10... Best wishes, Tsira

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Kerry O'Connor 06 October 2009

You have captured the uncertainty and yearning of lovers the world over. Well written!

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David Harris

David Harris

Bradfield, England
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