Wind! As Soft As It Is Please Read And Make Advice! Poem by Ashley Reeves (male)(13)

Wind! As Soft As It Is Please Read And Make Advice!



that frosty tap of the gentle air,
that freshning smell that makes the pair,
its softning touch, spinechilling ice,
i wish i wish. i could surfice.

then the world takes perplexement,
its slow creep, just a segment,
doesnt it remind you of a glimmering star,
its enchanting breath will take you far.

but finally with naught to fear,
it swiftly sways without a tear,
its great mind could destroy us all,
but forget that we must stand tall.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Amanda Lukas 24 April 2008

Its there something I've missed here? Why all the (13) 's?

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Robert Gardner (13) 13 March 2008

A good use of vocabulary yet remember those capitals!

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