Wish Upon A Star Poem by Claudia Claudia

Wish Upon A Star

Rating: 5.0


She can still feel the touch of your hands
She can still see the way you smile
in her head
She can still feel the warmth of your body
when you hug her
She can still feel the beat of your heart
when you grab her hand
and put it on your chest that day

But there is one thing that she can't feel
or even see
It's when you give her
that sweet forehead kisses

She just can't wait to see you.

She misses you
and she doesn't want to lose you.

You're her star.
And you know,
'... even the night sky doesn't look beautiful without a star' she whispered.


12-04-14

Saturday, April 26, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love,star
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Colleen Courtney 26 April 2014

I really like this one Claudia but may I be so bold as to suggest the last line would be better if you used the word doesn't instead of don't. I think it might come across better. It really is a lovely poem! !

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