Wishing Poem by jennifer R carter

Wishing

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i keep on wishing you were by my side
and that you had never lied
the things you said i believed
i just don't understand why i was deceived
i gave you my heart and you know i care
i dreamed about a day when you'd be there
then everything we had got crushed in a blink of an eye
making me wish that i'd die

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew Joseph 09 December 2009

In a blink of an eye, is all it takes 4 tables 2 turn.4 happy 2 sad n 4 sad 2 happy. We prepare 4 the worst but hope 4 the best, but wishing 4 the worst ain't an option. It's a good poem

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Shy Beauty Raven 18 May 2009

wow jennifer this is a good poem. i had a similar experience and it is good.

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