Cleo Blue

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Wishing On A Star - Poem by Cleo Blue

I sit by my windowsil
Wishing that this wasn't real
This feeling of lonelyness
That i can't describe
This feeling of hurt
Are you catching my vibe?

So i'm wishing on a star
I don't know where you are
But i'll find you someday
Somehow
Just maybe not now

I get so frustrated
Or those feelings i've always hated
So i'll pull my knees to my chest
And just cry

I don't want to be alone
Maybe i can handle it on my own
But i really don't want to
You can get addicted to being so sad you need to shed your tears
But i'm being killed inside from my insecure fears
I dont know if i can make it through

Someone come save me
From deep in this hell
Someone come fix my heart
pull me of the well

I'm wishing on a star
Don't even know who you are
Or maybe i met you before
Just hope i can meet you
Or see you once more

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

I only have four lines of the poem cuz im writin on the spot i showed my cousin poem hunter and she spent the night and we recorded some stuff [us singing] then it started skipping i was like 'Kuso! ' yea... so anyway this is kind of a love poem i mean it is but *sigh(8* not sure yet i have yet to write it im doing the authors note first The first person to comment on ALL of my poems i will love forever and i'll write you all the poems you want [no lie i love writing] Or even half of my poems I LOVE COMMENTS OR REVIEWS OR WHATEVER i literally scream or whisper-yell 'Yay! I want to write another one now and maybe they'll like that too'

Comments about Wishing On A Star by Cleo Blue

  • Kuzo Freak (1/15/2013 11:57:00 PM)


    nice poem! ! it's probobly a true poem, so I will give some advice, when I was 13 girls still had cooties. so maybe you should stop waiting for the right guy, and just enjoy your life until your a little older. and in the mean time keep and eye out for that one who your waiting for. I'm sure he will find you ;) anyways, I just liked the poem. pol ease feel free to comment on my poems and read them too! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 14, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 15, 2013


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