Wednesday, June 21, 2006

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Heart beats and fingers press,
Music resounds- the keys I caress.
A burning sensation I do discover,
In my dark-pitted stomach- all is a blunder.
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Dominique Lorraine
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ashley shoemaker 04 July 2006

...well... when you first read this to me i felt the artisticness flowing from your voice, but when i read it myself i felt the love flowing through each word. you are such a great poet. i look up to your work, although i must say i will never be able to match it. this is a wonderful piece. please keep them coming!

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K. Jared Hosein 21 June 2006

A very entertaining and fluent piece that details the saccharine feelings expressions and obtained during the creation of art - the self-meditation of it and relaxation and contentment that can be found in it. An excellent read, and personally looking forward to more of your poems, D.L. - K.

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