Without Pain Poem by Sean Green

Without Pain

Rating: 5.0


The dream arrived again
on the wings of fitful sleep
landing upon the reposed
feather light as it explodes

this visitor without kind regard
for the life that would remain
after walls are removed
only there to hold the tide

if escape were to last
a treasure valued above all else
remain awake against the hope
these revenants to dissuade

their reminder of what came before
separate from the empty now
a void designed to replicate
nothingness without the pain.

© 2019. Sean Green. All Rights Reserved.20190610.

Monday, June 10, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: dreaming
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poem "Without Pain" is about the reminders thrust upon us by errant dreams, those who insist that the balm of waking is a false reality.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ratnakar Mandlik 10 June 2019

" A void designed to replicate Nothingness without the pain" Profound conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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