Friday, November 18, 2016

Without You. Comments

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Without you,
my son,
there's just
the indentations
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Terry Collett
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Kim Barney 18 November 2016

This poem about grief is very well done. It reads like a true story. If it is, I'm sorry for your loss. If it is not, you have a great imagination. I especially liked this part: Without you, my son, there's a hole in my aged heart; my wounded soul is torn apart, thinking of each aspect of you

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