Sunday, May 25, 2008

Words And Music (Sestina) Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I could go beyond time,
And life be transformed into music;
If all that is subject to change
Could be fixed into an intricate pattern;
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Paul Hansford
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Susan Jarvis 26 May 2008

Bravo! This elaborate and complex form is given the natural air of conversation. Yet the lyrical persona shines through in such lines as; 'The rhythm, the melody, the harmony...' The allusions to time and movement remind me of the philosophies of Eliot. An eviable creation. S :)

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