Friday, July 22, 2016

Working Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

She took my money with a smile
I said how long she said just awhile
I was shy my face was red
As she led me to her bed
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Gerard Woods
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Dr Antony Theodore 22 July 2016

Then I gave a sigh of ecstasy... led me to the door, never to see again. love, mystery, human being, tendencies of the body and the mind, , , , , , , , , , desire, wish....... all come in in this poem. thank you for the expressions of love......

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Gerard Woods 23 July 2016

Thank you for your comments on working lady much needed I think every poet needs some kind of comment positive or negative, it means someone somewhere as taken the time to read what the poet has written I will read your poems you have given me to read thanks again

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