Tuesday, November 4, 2014
World Of Illusion. Comments
Rating: ★2.3
This world of illusion seems
an abode of shadows, a tale of past.
A transitory phase, or, a scattered dream.
Short, as a wave over the other, surpassed.
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Kay Staley
04 November 2014
Don't like the end. Great words though; good job with the rhyme scheme. Overall a nice poem to read and then maybe forget or maybe remember. Its on the verge.
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2/22/2026 5:33:06 AM # 1.0.0
Hmm. On the contrary,end of the poem is quite bright,joyous and ordeal free. Characterised with eternity and the assents of the Lord. The world of Paradise. A comparison is made between both the lives. But thanks for your valuable comments.