World Of Illusions Poem by Poetic Sky

World Of Illusions

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The world of illusion,
A land of lies and deceive,
It predicts nothing but the fear in others eyes.

Alas, what have we let our future become?
A world full of mistrust, and hearts filled with gloom.
Where trust is a hard thing to find,
And no one is ever truly kind.

The future is uncertain, and hope is hard to keep.
The promises we make, are false and cheap.
It's a world of deception and lies,
Where no one can truly be wise.

So let us not forget the truth,
That the world of illusion, will never be soooth.
Let's remember our past,
To protect our future, and make it last.

Wednesday, November 8, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: illusion,lies
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 30 December 2023

PS, I believe you 'want' 'deceit', not 'deceive' in line 2. DECEIT: 'the action or practice of deceiving someone by concealing or misrepresenting the truth.'

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Bri Edwards 30 December 2023

IF the past has been so gloomy-sounding, I think I could hope to NOT make it 'last'! ! ! ! ! ! : ) OR : ( bri! ! !

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Bri Edwards 30 December 2023

I, m not sure why you write about a 'world of illusion'. Hmm? : )

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Bri Edwards 30 December 2023

Damn PC &/or PH! ! ! Use 'deceit', not 'deceive', AND 'will never soothe' OR 'never be smooth'.

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Bri Edwards 30 December 2023

Wow, the poem 'disappeared without warning after I left part of a comment? ?

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Bri Edwards 30 December 2023

'....will never be soooth. I think you 'want': '...will never be smooth' OR '...will never soothe.' SOOTHE: '

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