Tuesday, May 10, 2011

Writing About Her? Comments

Rating: 4.5

…She is beyond the realms of expressions!
Endless oceans of language
Are but a pint of adoration
Of the unfathomable beauty of her
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Aditya Chandrasen Salvi
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Shadow Girl 11 May 2011

Ok well i am no poetry expert either i just wirte from my heart and soul and i can truly say you have done this here. Beautiful. Short, touching, sweet. Don't think you need any guidance from me! Keep wrting. I personally enjoy free verse best as their are no restrictions of time, space, rhythm and rhyme on your feelings!

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Aditya Chandrasen Salvi

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Ahmednagar, Maharashtra, India
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