Friday, February 26, 2016

Writing Distinctly Comments

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Everything being alright as I write distinctly what my
mind is seeing through rhythms, translating it all into
poetical verses for everyone to read.
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Daniel Brick 28 February 2016

You come close to the source of your inspiration but in the last stanza the sheer wonder of it, the spontaneity of of so many factors working together at lightning speed is apparent to you, and your poem closes in mystery rather than revelation. Someday, perhaps in another dimension of being, that mystery will in an instant reveal itself. Right now it is sufficient to know we live within a MYSTERY that is benign and inspiring.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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