Yelling.......In A Whisper... Poem by trinity aana

Yelling.......In A Whisper...

Rating: 5.0


Oh! so its you, discerning, as only you can be
persuasion, grit plain nude grit, perturbing, you
let sleeping lions sleep let bluebird be quiet
your esteem arises from organic force, your sin original.
deafening din, silent uproar, dense light
Oh! so its you, as only you can be
favouring a faux pas, climbing the sky, downing with fever
Ursa Major, Callisto, Zeus....not be callous
let me circumvent, let me cohort, let me be....me
Oh! so its you light year away as only you can be
yelling my name......still in a whisper......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr.subhendu Kar 02 August 2008

art when discerns the cajoles of whisper the paints yet discend with colors glow ravings of scarlet red on the trembling lips slowly melts into the rungs of midnight blue................excellent exposition dazzling whisper by the eloquence of imagery, yet of unique genre,10+, thanks for sharing

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Asma Bahrainwala 23 January 2007

a nice poem... i like the paradox...'yelling in a whisper'... Asma...

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Anne Jojo 02 November 2006

lovely... i just love it! keep up!

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