Friday, November 18, 2016

Yet Unwritten Comments

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There's a fine line between happiness and sadness.
Truly happiness doesn't come without the price of having suffered -
And suffering doesn't reveal itself without happiness.
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Simon Olafsson
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Sister Frances 20 November 2016

Very well written...There's a fine line between happiness and sadness... and your lines that follow ring very true. Keep writing

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Chinedu Dike 19 November 2016

Lovely philosophical piece of poetry, elegantly brought forth in good diction with insight. Beautiful motivational poem well articulated and nicely encapsulated with conviction. Thanks for sharing Simon. Please read my poem POETIC MASTERPIECE.

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