Tuesday, April 28, 2009

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You,
I loved you,
I gave you my heart,
you were my world,
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Carla Pizano
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Nikki Au 10 November 2011

ohmaiiigawd~~~~~~~~~this represents me when i had my first fell in love with someone.......

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rago rago 28 April 2009

a good write........but do not be always negative. Fantastic write in a poetical way.

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Saadat Tahir 28 April 2009

thats a new twist on age old feelings nice emotive piece..liked it cheers

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