Menime Soul

Rookie - 10 Points (August 2005 - 6th September 2010 / Khonsa)

@ You @ - Poem by Menime Soul

I feel your presence as my thoughts go way, way deep..
I walk along the forest trail and silently i weep.

As i find the right direction to make a good connection,
I stumble upon a problem as my life is not complete.

The elements leave me windswept like the well-worn sands of time,
The hourglass is running slowly to the day that you are mine.

I bind my love to you once more as i take another step,
If i could see more clearly i would not be such a wreck.

My heart bleeds with such passion as my soul cries out for you,
But i shared my secrets with the trees as it was only those that knew.

How strong my faith is for you when you have a troubled soul,
I cannot see you left behind to let things reach their toll.

For through the dark mists of confusion i know it's worth the wait,
Because the sun will be shining brightly as happiness is our fate.

I make my vow with promise, as i know just what is due...
For i shall never let you down my love, for i know just what is true.

I feel your presence as my thoughts go way, way deep..
I walk along the forest trail and silently i weep.


Comments about @ You @ by Menime Soul

  • (12/19/2009 8:34:00 AM)


    ''our sweetest songs are those that tell of saddest thoughts''
    these are the words of the great poet PB shelley
    this poem is the perfect example.......great work..........
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Poem Submitted: Friday, December 11, 2009



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