Monday, April 12, 2010

You And I (A Lyrical Poem) Comments

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You and I in spring first
Green rising high to new
Flowing in gradation burst
Strength rechargeable thru
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Peter S. Quinn
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Olivia Helmes 12 April 2010

I really liked this poem. its fflow and topicwas really refreshing and your vocabulary use was very good when dealing with this theme. Amazing poem great job.

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