Tuesday, March 18, 2008

You Are Always On My Mind Comments

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I Lay Awake Waiting For You.
But You Never Come.
What Did i Do To Make You Go.
You Are Always On My Mind.
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sarah clifford
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Allan James Saywell 18 March 2008

OH the joy of being fifteen, dont change anything you are what you write and what you write is amazing, for one so youmg AWSOME

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Anna Pacheco 18 March 2008

In the line 'If Your Out There Somewhere, ' the 'Your' should be 'You're.'

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