You Are Benevolent Mercy Ocean Poem by elangovan selvapperumal

You Are Benevolent Mercy Ocean

Rating: 5.0


You are benevolent mercy ocean
Durgha is my strong passion
enemies can't live your nation
to you is my veneration

Friday, July 22, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: enemies,ocean,passion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 22 July 2011

Excellent poem with a lot of depth. Fine and vivid imagery. The poem has a strong structure. I like and rate it 10. Kindly read and rate my poem 'A busy street' on page 1. Thanks in advance. Warm regards Akmal

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