Monday, March 10, 2008

You Are Life Comments

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You are the lightning that strikes my heart,
in a second you excert the life from my heart.
Like a poison you are,
your non-loyal actions run down my veins,
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julio anzueto
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Greenwolfe 1962 01 July 2008

This is worth reading because there is creativity and purpose in this structure. It is not like other writings along this line because of both the content and its presentation. It tells a different story, though the outcome may be the same. That's what gives it value. GW62

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