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I want to say that this is romantic, but it misses something. To tell a woman you love her, and you will be there for her, and take ehr to places of her choice, is romantic, but the way you say it here, isn't quite on the mark, though. What I mean is this; the following line, is what doesn't make sense: 'making you deserve someone who's not going to take you to rock bottom you deserve' Without this line, this poem would definitely be romantic. Love & hugs, Barbara