Audrey Heller

Audrey Heller

Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida
Friday, September 5, 2008

You'Re Everything To Me Comments

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I love you in the morning and I
love you in the night. I love the
way you kiss me and the way
you hold me tight. I love you for
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Audrey Heller
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Aiden Howarth 05 September 2008

'And I love you most of all, for just being you.'... i personally would have put... 'And I love you most of all, JUST FOR being you.' think it goes better... Any way, its a great flowing poem really like its simplicity, the because line at the end lets it down slightly should be just 'cos' Aiden Howarth

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Audrey Heller

Audrey Heller

Bronx, New York/ Now residing in Florida
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