You'Re Mind Poem by Flamora Clevare

You'Re Mind

Rating: 4.5


Get a life because you're not taking mine
You may think you are tough but those are trick in your mind
The more you complain, the sooner you die
You're life is my toy; you're nothing but a lie

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 21 September 2008

Great poem, keep it up, i'm looking forward to reading some more of your poems. i've read all of yours now, you're a great poet and don't forget it. thanks Athena xx *** words will change the world ***

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 September 2008

It's like a child's play kinda poem.kee[ writing Flamora.

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