mahmood shahidi

Rookie - 13 Points (1970 / Iran)

You Save Me! - Poem by mahmood shahidi

Look at me,
How, sadness within my eyes drops,
How my rogue black shade, is captured by the ruthless sun.
How, all my existence, is broken.
Flares catch me, lift me, and capture me.
All my sky is full of meteorites.
You came from the far away lands, of clouds lands …You saved me..


Comments about You Save Me! by mahmood shahidi

  • (5/11/2014 2:31:00 AM)


    Thou my savior... thou art within me
    Nice try buddy!
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    (11/18/2017 1:17:00 AM)

    So everyone is his own best savior?

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, September 2, 2012


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