You Save Me! Poem by mahmood shahidi

You Save Me!



Look at me,
How, sadness within my eyes drops,
How my rogue black shade, is captured by the ruthless sun.
How, all my existence, is broken.
Flares catch me, lift me, and capture me.
All my sky is full of meteorites.
You came from the far away lands, of clouds lands …You saved me..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahyar Goodarzi 11 May 2014

Thou my savior... thou art within me Nice try buddy!

0 0 Reply
mahmood 18 November 2017

So everyone is his own best savior?

0 0
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success