Thursday, April 26, 2007

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Even as you say
You love me
I hear you from some distant
Tunnel of my mind say
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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes
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Vijay Menon 09 October 2009

its a nice poem indeed

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Iris Washington 27 April 2007

This is so deep. The way you write the poem, make you feel the pain.

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... Sheila 26 April 2007

Oh, such sadness and heartache....hopelessness. You write it so well that the reader feels your pain. Very good write. Top marks.

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Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Dorothy (Alves) Holmes

Baltimore, Maryland
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