Monday, April 6, 2015

Your Beautiful Eye Comments

Rating: 4.5

I dream about your eye all day
If we are together or apart
I dream of wrapping my fingers around it
squirting the last drops from your cold dead heart.
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Sarah Dharmasiri
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Chinedu Dike 07 April 2015

Bottled up rage, anger and disgust occasioned by mental and physical abuse received while in tragic bliss of love well depicted in the poem. A well articulated poem written from the heart. A nice poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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