Your Fault Poem by sophie white
Your Fault
i love you baby was all she sed with her finger on the trigger and the gun to her head,
she..pulled..bk..her..finger..and..bang..she...was..dead,
None..of..the..troubles..floating..around,
as..she..lay..breathless..lying..on..the..ground,
Looking..down..from..the..sky,
Her..boyfriend..gave..a..giant..cry,
As..she..hurt..herself..one..step..too..far,
He..was..left..with..the..scar,
knowing..it..was..his..fault..she..was..gone,
He..had..hurt..her..and..she..had..kept..it..so..long,
But..now..she..couldnt..speak..a..word,
All..that..had..happened..was..so..ubsurbed,
But..now..it..was..too..little..too..late,
She..was..suicidal..and..just..culdnt..wait,
So..next..tyme..when..you..say..sumthin..bad,
Just..imagen..that..person..feeling..lonley..and..sad!
Sophie, you have a strong poem but the words you used are so badly spelled that it takes away from your verse. Words are a poet's tools. Just as a carpenter will not use rusty tools, poets should work hard to use good spelling. You can show the speaker's poverty-stricken plight in life without misspelling her words. Raynette
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4/23/2024 10:57:07 PM # 1.0.0.1119
it was very well written but confusing with the misspelled words...peace out