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it was very well written but confusing with the misspelled words...peace out

Sophie, you have a strong poem but the words you used are so badly spelled that it takes away from your verse. Words are a poet's tools. Just as a carpenter will not use rusty tools, poets should work hard to use good spelling. You can show the speaker's poverty-stricken plight in life without misspelling her words. Raynette