Your Hugs Poem by Jess

Your Hugs

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Your hugs they mena the world to me
I dont know what it is about them
They just make me feels o loved
I wanna be with you
BUt too afraid to ask
Ive never relized this
Until today
That your hugs are so loving
And so are you
I wish I could call you mine
But I doubt you feel the same way for me
I dont want to be rejected
So im too afriend too ask
Just one simple question
Will you be mine?
Your hugs make me feel so loved
Just the way I should be

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 05 July 2006

Wow, Excellent poem you are a compassionate writer. You seem very in love. I feel like that at times too. It does make one nervous when they care for someone so deeply. Were afraid of rejection. Great write, good imagery and you write with great expression. Take care.

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