Your Pain Her Pain Poem by Rhonda Hiler

Your Pain Her Pain

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There are many trials through out life
many things that bring living strife
At the time it is occurring with you
it seems like theres nothing that you can do

It seems like it is never going to end
feels like your hurting will never mend
You just want to lay down and not get up
you can feel this tied up knot in your gut

You close yourself into a room
keeping yourself into a gloom
Shutting others out so you can cry
you just keep on wondering why

ON the other side standing outside your door
is someone not knowing -what to do any more
She is crying and now feeling gloom
because shes' wanting inside that room

She feels like there's nothing that she can do
trying to help you and love you too
She feels like tied up knots are in her gut
but you just lay there and you wont get up

She feels like this will never end
she thought she was at least your friend
You shut her out and made her cry
shes outside your door-wondering why

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saju Abraham 02 March 2011

This truly is a poignant poem full of pain. I can feel what you feel as I go through it a lot in my life. You have expressed the pain through this nice poem. Good to have read this one.

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Rhonda Hiler

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