Your Unconditional Love Poem by Prabir Gayen

Your Unconditional Love

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Your Unconditional Love

You tried your best to save me,
With your love you become anxious,
Your anxiety shows your compassion,
You tried your best to protect me.

Unknown are the ways of God,
Everything is fine and predestined,
Nothing is certain and secured,
Life is every moment becoming death.

Death is the ultimate truth,
Life is a long chain of death,
With birth death enters with wit,
With birth daeth is born.

Nothing is wrong in life and death,
Life takes repose with rejoice in death,
Quietness of life is attained through death,
Only death is the ultimate crowning.

Mind is restless and it is a disease,
Death is the only medication,
Recuperation of mind is Swindling,
Mind rests in peace only in decease.

I am the way and the crucial point,
Happens everything within me,
Death is like the evening sun
setting with graceful hue,
I am death with my boastful mind.

My death is not my death,
Anger, aversion and carving
within my self are dying,
I am dying in my deathless space.

You tried you best to save me from death,
Your love is the light on my way,
Death is always at the end of my mind,
Mind and no-mind are my rearmost place.

Time is playing the role of life and death,
Sometime light and sometime darkness,
Time chooses everything with its whims,
Life is beautiful with time and death is the womb of time to provide peace and bliss.

You tried your best to foster my self,
Your love has become the last light,
Life is a happening and death too,
Now is the Time to return to source.

@Prabir Gayen
2: 30 AM, Sun, June 6 /2021.

Saturday, June 5, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luis A. Estable 05 June 2021

The first stanza uses commas when periods would serve them much better. They contain complete thoughts. The second stanza is faulty in logic, especially in the last two lines. Things can`t be fine and predestined and not certain and not secure.

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