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Your Unconditional Love

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Your Unconditional Love

You tried your best to save me,
With your love you become anxious,
Your anxiety shows your compassion,
You tried your best to protect me.

Unknown are the ways of God,
Everything is fine and predestined,
Nothing is certain and secured,

Life is every moment becoming death.
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Saturday, June 5, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: affinity and love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life and death
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Luis A. Estable 05 June 2021

The first stanza uses commas when periods would serve them much better. They contain complete thoughts. The second stanza is faulty in logic, especially in the last two lines. Things can`t be fine and predestined and not certain and not secure.

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