Your Unjust Marking Poem by Rosalita Fern

Your Unjust Marking

Rating: 5.0


Oh look at you,
Thinking your so great,
You swoop in and mark my poems low.
I am not talented.
I dont claim to be,
I write about life and what i know.
They may not rhyme,
But are from the heart.
Yours i wonder...are they true?
Based on experience?
When 5 voyes at ten, that suggests that it may be an enjoyable poem.
But you swoop in with your 1,
Well arrogant poet,
sod off and leave my poems alone as others like them!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Marieta Maglas 29 June 2009

''I write about life and what i know. They may not rhyme, But are from the heart'' this is the most important..to be written from the heart..10++ .

0 0 Reply
~ Jon London ~ 29 June 2009

Rosalita my friend, there's alot of this that goes on my lovely...you just keep writing and expressing in the heart felt way that you do....I for one enjoy your creations...keep penning, and never stop exploring

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success