Wednesday, September 3, 2008

Your Words Slit My Wrists Comments

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Your voice is like a blade
Your words slit my wrists
But still your love.. It wont fade
No matter how many lies, or twists
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tHeNameLeSs23drea Andrea Rivera
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Jack Tex 09 September 2008

Tender flow of pure feelings, Perfect rhyming, Strong metaphors, a Romantic tone with no embelishments attached. Pleasure + Understanding + Meaning = Your Poetry

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