A rose blossomed in my heart,
An angel sprayed her tongue on my face,
I forgot the world and tore it apart,
And we melted in a fairy embrace.
...
A Grain of sand,
Fell in my hand,
Hurt with a spear,
Burst into tear,
...
A little star bathing in the lights of God,
Fell of the light,
On the clod,
I saw her 'nd lost the sight.
...
A black moth,
Filled with an anguish wrath,
Sprang out of a glazy fife,
Wrapp'd in a crazy knife,
...
A glazy moon
With a human face,
In the sky aboon,
Lacerat'd my heart with her mace,
...
Remark:
A friend of mine wrote on facebook: 'Rim Rimoucha is going to treat herself tonight...having dinner with her lovely husband to celebrate their wedding anniversary '.
She inspired me the following verses:
...
Deeply you sleep,
all the night I am awoke,
you're in your husband's leap
and I am in my wife's hands miskeep,
...
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The Angel Farewell
A rose blossomed in my heart,
An angel sprayed her tongue on my face,
I forgot the world and tore it apart,
And we melted in a fairy embrace.
The sun eclipsed 'nd my Sun shone athwart,
Her beams sterilized every place,
My Sun was the forepart,
And all the stars were her boniface.
As days and nights moved 'nd moved away
Kiss 'nd hugs hover'd in the sky,
My heart skin began to flay,
And all my veins began to weep and cry,
All the green became gray,
And all I hear'd was a hellish sigh,
My angel hover'd 'nd hover'd away,
And all the bliss said to me good-bye,
Good-bye, good-bye, goodbye...
My dear Ridha; i really like reading poetry, but i'm not great at giving critique about it. anyway i think about your collection of poems the following; a series of poems that seem abstract, but they all seem strangely related. I loved each and every one of them, but my absolute favorite goes to 'Angel Farwell'. This is wonderful and beautiful and it made me feel peaceful by reading it. I promise, this'll be on my pick list by maybe tonight. :)