Ronald Saunders

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  • Mathew Lewis Mathew Lewis (6/3/2006 8:04:00 PM)

    Its a good poem but I'm worried that you got a bit cought up in the rhyme scheme. It belies the true point of the poem. It's a beautiful accumulation of words but the structure of the poem has undone you.

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Best Poem of Ronald Saunders

Promises, Promises!

They come with yearnings and compromises
They come in all colors, shapes and sizes
Sometimes the maker is very, very clever
Only honesty with love and lies they never

Then there are those whose game is of deceit
Their motives are dishonest and out to cheat
Promises can be simple or very unique
A love and desire of a heart that will seek

O' the clandestine frills of a new loving start
Promises unspoken can be as sharp as a dart
Promises, promises love letters to so begin
The journey to new romance for a loving win

Promises are the light the spirit...

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