First if you could please rate my poems to see where I stand because I am not any type of writer. In fact I suck at grammar. I just write my feelings in my own poetry style. If it is from the heart there is no format to follow. I don't want to impress anybody, I personally think my poems are no good. I just like to write and this way my poems are not just stored away for me to see. I want the world to have a chance to feel what I feel. A lot of my writings are from my one true love.
how much i really miss you
i could count a million ways
i don't get to see you much
but i'm thinking everyday
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god please forgive me for the things that i do
the ways i live life and the paths that i choose
for the people i see that are left for the grave
for the one love i lost and the girls that i've played
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love. what is love?
love is a mystery and it sits on its own
i don't trust people but i hate being alone
after she leaves you will lay there and moan
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Life's getting harder from day to day
i'm running short of theories, i hate it this way
i wish it were different, i'm feeling so poor
this hard work isn't paying, can't do it nomore
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Daddy, Daddy, where are you?
I need you here with me
You said that you weren’t going far
But it’s you I cannot see
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