young lass

Rookie (sep.18 1993 / minnesota)

young lass
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i grew up in minniesota in a small town i'm a country girl. I enjoy trail riding writeing and sports. I'm in a play called show time on the showboat and i'm still in school. I want to write plays and books when i'm older hope it works out. more »

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  • Natalie Sapphire (6/5/2008 6:53:00 PM)

    I enjoy your writing, very amateur but rhymes well. I am surely not saying being ameteur is a bad thing, but I would like you to go and do something for me. Instead of sticking to a rhyme scheme, try to think of something you care about very much. It could be something you love, or maybe something you hate. Think about it very carefully, and just write. Write out all your thoughts and your feelings about the thing you're thinking about. Think deeper than just rhyme. Just some constructive critisism.

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Sad Prince Charming

prince charming where are you
right know i wish i'd have meant u
fori feel like a ghost
i sit here locked away waiting for the day
when u come galloping my way

prince charming your not there
maybe no one cares
about a princes like me
i'm trapped and there's no place to flee

prince charming you forgot to get me
know i'm alone in a dungeon i call home
with little to eat
and no place to sleep

prince charming came
to late now he's ashamed
that he forgot about a princess he loved
she still waits but now she ...

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