hi...
i'm not an aspiring poet but i really like making some..
so if you got some comments, whether it maybe negative or positive,
I'd gladly accept it..
I may use your advice when i'm going to make a new one.
Once in a silent night,
I passed by a dark room.
Dark and desolated;
lonely and forlorn.
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So happy I am when I'm with you.
Happiness that is oh so true.
You to me, gives the sunshine.
You to me a true friend of mine.
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