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David Normand (7/13/2007 11:02:00 PM)
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ONce again your knack for meter and rhyme shows through. I liked this poem but I thought that the first line, second stanza was kind of cliche-ish. Try to stay away from cliches. You have something unique to say, say it in your own way.
Keep writing.
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